Thursday, 10 December 2015
Tuesday, 8 December 2015
Salesi_Writing with figurative language
WALT: Write with figurative language
SC: Use adjectives and similes to describe a flavour
- Introduction what, why
- Describe (use adjectives)
- Compare/contrast (use a simile to compare the taste to being like something else)
- Expand (what flavours might you like to try? If you could create a flavour what would it be and why… give as much detail as possible)
- Get a friend to buddy read
- Get your teacher to check
- Get a photo
- Share to Blog
On Thursday the 3rd December 2015 we got to try some fantastic chocolate from Mrs Parker because she shared her baking to the Whittaker's company, and they sent her some chocolate to share with us. When we got to try the chocolate, it tasted sweet,crunchy and sticky.When we eat the chocolate it felt delicious and crunchy. If I can create my own chocolate it will be fizzy mango popping candy, inside the white chocolate.
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chocolate.
Sport with Tamaki
On Friday the 4 2015 we had sport with Tamaki.
Before we started we go into group of 15.
When we got into our group we got chosen from two
students from tamaki their names were ben and ten. When we got chosen we walked up to the field and played a game called moon ball. To play moon ball
you will need a big ball so you can bop them of the ground and to get a goal you need kick it in the goal post. Next we played a tiring game called touch
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Sport writing
Wednesday, 25 November 2015
what cause the seasons?
What cause seasons
Seasons are summer,winter,spring,Autumn . These happen every year because of the tilt of the planet’s axis. This means when the Earth spins the sun’s light hits us on different angles.
In summer the sun’s light hit us strongly but in winter we get less sun.
Thursday, 22 October 2015
Salesi and Lucas Best frined for ever
One day Lucas and I went to the pools with my mum and dad. We went to the pools because it was so hot in the sun. We did not walk in the sun because it was so hot so we asked my dad if he can drop us off to the pools.
When we walked into the pools I got changed and walked to the cold pool so it can cool me down. After 2 minutes I felt a little bit cold so I hopped out of the cold pool and walked to the warm pool with Lucas.
When I got to the warm pool, Lucas and I played tag. I was in first. Lucas had 20 seconds to run away, but he was to slow so I caught up to him so fast, then I tagged him. Then I ran away from him but Lucas did not chase after me, because he was to tired. So he gave up. When we came out of the warm pool
Lucas and I asked my mum if I we can have hot chips because we were so hungry for hot chips. Lucas and I had the best time at together.
At school Lucas and I go and get the milk from the hall. When we get to class, our classmates are doing SSR, they have to be reading when we give them their milk carton. When the get their milk they say thank you to lucas or me. We love having nice cold milk after morning tea.
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best frined.,
good writing
Tuesday, 20 October 2015
Gratiude and refections
- Complete the graphic organiser: You’ll need 3 things that you are grateful for this year, and one thing that you still want to achieve by the end of the year.
- Use the ideas you have put on the graphic organiser to write your reflection. You will need 6 paragraphs:
- Introduction - quickly list your details that you are grateful for.
- Detail 1 - with evidence
- Detail 2 - with evidence
- Detail 3 - with evidence
- Detail 4 - with evidence
- Conclusion - briefly list your details and state that you are grateful for these achievements.
- Switch your doc to ‘suggesting’ mode and get a buddy to read and edit.
- Re-read yourself and check that it makes sense.
- Share to blog
This year I am grateful that I played rugby league for glenbrae school, I also got blogger of the month, and I am grateful for milk at school. I also want to achieve more in Rainbow Reading.
In Rugby League we played at Point England School. We only
scored two tries in rugby league.
IN August I got blogger of the month. I got blogger of the month, because I made a movenote about the book I was reading
I achieve move levels in writing,reading. Am grateful that I help mum at home. I also want to achieve the next level in Rainbow reading.
I am also grateful for milk in schools. Milk is so important
because It is healthy and it is good for our muscles,teeth,calcium,protein and bones.
The sausage dog race
- Choose ONE of the following Kiwi Kids News articles
- Read it carefully and below create 6 multichoice or true/false questions for your article. Remember to choose some ‘close’ answers to make your reader think really hard. Set up the questions like this
Example: 1. How many planets are in the solar system
- 12
- 9
- 5
- 4
Record your answers at the bottom of this page.
3. On your blog, share:
- the link to the article
- the questions (numbered)
- DO NOT share the answers.
- A sentence explaining to your readers to read the article and then answer in the comments. At the end of the week you will reply to the comments to say who was correct/incorrect.
4. Complete the rubric self-assessment below. Highlight what you achieved.
Example:
How many dogs joined the competition?
- 120
- 50
- 200
- 21
Which dog came third in the race?
- Hayley
- Dachshund
- Chilli
- Swanson
What is another for a Dachshund
- Potato dog
b.sausage dog
c.carrot dog
d.apple dog
What costume where they wearing?
- race car driver costume
- a swimming costume
- eat costume
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good writing,
kiwi kids news.
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