Animated Story
These are my ideas on my animated stories
Friday, 4 March 2016
Tuesday, 9 February 2016
Thursday, 10 December 2015
Tuesday, 8 December 2015
Salesi_Writing with figurative language
WALT: Write with figurative language
SC: Use adjectives and similes to describe a flavour
- Introduction what, why
- Describe (use adjectives)
- Compare/contrast (use a simile to compare the taste to being like something else)
- Expand (what flavours might you like to try? If you could create a flavour what would it be and why… give as much detail as possible)
- Get a friend to buddy read
- Get your teacher to check
- Get a photo
- Share to Blog
On Thursday the 3rd December 2015 we got to try some fantastic chocolate from Mrs Parker because she shared her baking to the Whittaker's company, and they sent her some chocolate to share with us. When we got to try the chocolate, it tasted sweet,crunchy and sticky.When we eat the chocolate it felt delicious and crunchy. If I can create my own chocolate it will be fizzy mango popping candy, inside the white chocolate.
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chocolate.
Sport with Tamaki
On Friday the 4 2015 we had sport with Tamaki.
Before we started we go into group of 15.
When we got into our group we got chosen from two
students from tamaki their names were ben and ten. When we got chosen we walked up to the field and played a game called moon ball. To play moon ball
you will need a big ball so you can bop them of the ground and to get a goal you need kick it in the goal post. Next we played a tiring game called touch
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Sport writing
Wednesday, 25 November 2015
what cause the seasons?
What cause seasons
Seasons are summer,winter,spring,Autumn . These happen every year because of the tilt of the planet’s axis. This means when the Earth spins the sun’s light hits us on different angles.
In summer the sun’s light hit us strongly but in winter we get less sun.
Thursday, 22 October 2015
Salesi and Lucas Best frined for ever
One day Lucas and I went to the pools with my mum and dad. We went to the pools because it was so hot in the sun. We did not walk in the sun because it was so hot so we asked my dad if he can drop us off to the pools.
When we walked into the pools I got changed and walked to the cold pool so it can cool me down. After 2 minutes I felt a little bit cold so I hopped out of the cold pool and walked to the warm pool with Lucas.
When I got to the warm pool, Lucas and I played tag. I was in first. Lucas had 20 seconds to run away, but he was to slow so I caught up to him so fast, then I tagged him. Then I ran away from him but Lucas did not chase after me, because he was to tired. So he gave up. When we came out of the warm pool
Lucas and I asked my mum if I we can have hot chips because we were so hungry for hot chips. Lucas and I had the best time at together.
At school Lucas and I go and get the milk from the hall. When we get to class, our classmates are doing SSR, they have to be reading when we give them their milk carton. When the get their milk they say thank you to lucas or me. We love having nice cold milk after morning tea.
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best frined.,
good writing
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