WALT: write a recount using connectives and descriptive language
Butterfly Creek
On Monday 16 of March 2015 room 7 and 5 students went to Butterfly Creek to learn about dinosaurs, and crocodiles
When room7 got to butterfly creek we had morning tea.
first we went to the dinosaurs kingdom we got to take a photo in the dinosaurs mouth and egg. Next we went to the train then we went to the farm. At the farm we got to hold the
bunny rabbit.
My favourite part of the day was when we got to hold the bunny rabbits, because they felt warm and comfy.
1 comments:
It was a lovely bunny rabbit to hold, and you've used descriptive language to describe the experience. Well done.
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